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Josh Datko's avatar

I am glad to have picked up this collection.

David M Boyer's avatar

Brilliant! I always land on my face when I try something like this.

Celeste's avatar

Your use of periods at the end of these lines of unfinished ideas is interesting! The abruptness is jarring, but I'm guessing that's an effect you were going for. Well done!

X. P. Callahan's avatar

Thanks, Celeste. See also the Perelman poem at the link.

Jim Sanders's avatar

Sehr intressant.

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

I won’t forget, either. Thanks, X.P.

Janie Braverman's avatar

Thanks, X. P., for posting from your collection in such a fraught time.

There are many ways to kindle light.