RAINBOW ELEGY #1
The embedded rhymes are SO well done.
Thank you, Kim. This is Richard Howards's 7-10-10 syllabic tercet. I don't think he invented it, but he used it a lot.
Oh, I love this. Perfection.
Thank you, Ann.
wow. Brilliant
Thanks so much, Tina. I wrote the first draft 19 years ago but could not get it to work. Last week I ran across that draft in some old files and decided to take another crack at it. Hope you are well.
So cool that you found the right moment to complete it. I agree with Ann. Perfection. And completed at exactly the right time.
Thank you, Mary. Revision is my favorite part of the writing process.
What a poetic tribute!
Thanks, Kathleen.
Beautiful, X. P. So glad you kept that draft.
Thank you, Mary. I had given up on it.
Doug Carey was one of the kindest, truly best people I’ve ever met. I feel so sad remembering what a great loss this still is!
Of course. Always. And you introduced us!
Callahan! I really like this line, "a tableau floating up from memory-"!
That's some sick stuff!
Thank you!
Powerful work, XP.
The embedded rhymes are SO well done.
Thank you, Kim. This is Richard Howards's 7-10-10 syllabic tercet. I don't think he invented it, but he used it a lot.
Oh, I love this. Perfection.
Thank you, Ann.
wow. Brilliant
Thanks so much, Tina. I wrote the first draft 19 years ago but could not get it to work. Last week I ran across that draft in some old files and decided to take another crack at it. Hope you are well.
So cool that you found the right moment to complete it. I agree with Ann. Perfection. And completed at exactly the right time.
Thank you, Mary. Revision is my favorite part of the writing process.
What a poetic tribute!
Thanks, Kathleen.
Beautiful, X. P. So glad you kept that draft.
Thank you, Mary. I had given up on it.
Doug Carey was one of the kindest, truly best people I’ve ever met. I feel so sad remembering what a great loss this still is!
Of course. Always. And you introduced us!
Callahan! I really like this line, "a tableau floating up from memory-"!
That's some sick stuff!
Thank you!
Powerful work, XP.