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Laura Pilnick's avatar

Hard poem

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pamm hanson's avatar

i read layers of parallels in this poem.. especially considering the notes! um hmm

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David Donoghue's avatar

What an interesting exercise, I have never read something like this before.

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Cathy Wickham's avatar

Too painful for words, but you found them.

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Janie Braverman's avatar

Well done, XP. Love watching you work/think on the page

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X. P. Callahan's avatar

Thanks, Janie!

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