THIS POEM
You kill me!
I so enjoy this poem each time I read it. I especially love this:
has had to schuss down on its scrawny backside,
clutching a ski in each of its sad mittens.
"sad mittens" is a gem.
That very last line was truly dying with a dying fall.
What have you done! haha!
always a good one! Seems to "clear the palette" for working on!
"What have you done"! Great twist.
What have I done, reading "this Poem?" What have you done, writing it LOL!!
I love "Chairlifted to the summit of Parnassus"
Marie, Marie, hold on tight! And down we went.
😁
Now how do you think I feel? Chopped liver comes to mind.
You help me love my inner dejected poet.
Pick up those skis, dang it! Try again.
What have I done? I laughed.
Callahan! This line was spooky and made me nervous, "but eyes its own wrists with sinister intent." Great work here. I hope all is well!
Yes, thank you, all is well, and my wrists are fine, too.
Haha! This is hilarious!
Clever, witty and wise. 🙏
😜
You kill me!
I so enjoy this poem each time I read it. I especially love this:
has had to schuss down on its scrawny backside,
clutching a ski in each of its sad mittens.
"sad mittens" is a gem.
That very last line was truly dying with a dying fall.
What have you done! haha!
always a good one! Seems to "clear the palette" for working on!
"What have you done"! Great twist.
What have I done, reading "this Poem?" What have you done, writing it LOL!!
I love "Chairlifted to the summit of Parnassus"
Marie, Marie, hold on tight! And down we went.
😁
Now how do you think I feel? Chopped liver comes to mind.
You help me love my inner dejected poet.
Pick up those skis, dang it! Try again.
What have I done? I laughed.
Callahan! This line was spooky and made me nervous, "but eyes its own wrists with sinister intent." Great work here. I hope all is well!
Yes, thank you, all is well, and my wrists are fine, too.
Haha! This is hilarious!
Clever, witty and wise. 🙏
😜