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Celeste's avatar

Thank you for introducing me to the lune, a poetry form I'd never heard of! And such a fun poem packed full of possible interpretations. I love short poems.

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David Lyman's avatar

I love what can be said in such few words. Thanks for your introduction to the line!

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Laura Pilnick's avatar

Well it looked like a Snake!🐍

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X. P. Callahan's avatar

It did.

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pamm hanson's avatar

Love this- I see the snake! And of course love the notes!!!

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David Lyman's avatar

Damn spellcheck! I typed lune and it came out line!

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X. P. Callahan's avatar

I figured . . .

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Jason McBride's avatar

I'm off to go and read some lunes! Thanks for this wonderful introduction

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Mya Dexter's avatar

I'd never heard of lunes either, thank you, most interesting.

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Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

I definitely needed to learn about the lune. Thank you!

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X. P. Callahan's avatar

My pleasure. I hope you’ll try it.

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