And yes wowza on stanza two, almost stands alone and keeps ringing all the way through to the shy corners. yes, as all have said, . so tender, poignant, and beautiful.
Oh wow, so beautiful. I noticed the same lines as Deborah. And the lovely final stanza with its utterly moving "shy corners." This poem totally moved me.
"afterward the rooms / were bone flutes"
So tender...
Beautifully poignant
And yes wowza on stanza two, almost stands alone and keeps ringing all the way through to the shy corners. yes, as all have said, . so tender, poignant, and beautiful.
Wow that really hit home. Thank you for sharing.
Oh wow, so beautiful. I noticed the same lines as Deborah. And the lovely final stanza with its utterly moving "shy corners." This poem totally moved me.
A beauty.
Beautiful, like she was
Phew! What an exceptional piece. Every bit is masterful!
Thank you, and welcome.
Wonderful imagery. Love that second stanza.. and those shy corners.